Wednesday, September 4, 2013

She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not

Since I had so much fun writing my last reverso poem, I decided to try my hand at another.  This one's about my love/hate relationship with that great hamster wheel we call the treadmill.


I Hate You
Dear Treadmill,
You are my
Achilles' heel, okay?
You make the
minutes feel like hours.
I left work where
I don't care
If I work up a sweat
during my lunch break.
I fit you in,
but I have to go back.
You kick my ass.
You are so fast
and set  to climb
at almost ninety degrees!
I hate that it is
just staying in one place.
I want to be
on the ground
outside
when it's warm.




I Heart You
When it's warm
outside
on the ground
I want to be
just staying in one place.
I hate that it is
at almost ninety degrees
and set  to climb!
You are so fast
you kick my ass.
But I have to go back.
I fit you in
during my lunch break.
If I work up a sweat
I don't care.
I left work where
minutes feel like hours.
You make the
Achilles' heel okay.
You are my
dear treadmill.

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